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Angel of Alchemy ch1 by ~kitty-666:iconkitty-666:

Categories Literature > Prose > Fiction > Fantasy




"odi its been years god I've missed u!" ya sme here hey weres zaki?" "ah...well my dad took her the day u moved away and he lleft me and mom..." so how is ur mom?" nami didn't want to tell odi but she did cuz nami's mom was like a mother to odi " she pastaway..." "...!!"

odi was so sad she truned away for a moment then truend back to nami and was getting the tears off her face "im sorry nami" "its not ur fault she was just every sick..." "and now ur looking for zaki" "ya" odi was still sad but a lil happer "hey want to come odi?" "SORRY!!! i can't i have a shop here and i just can leave if i could i would ^_^" "well i better get going see ya around"

                                     IN THE TOWN OVER
"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!"
©2008-2009 ~kitty-666
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READ!!!!!!!!!! pic on top zakuro989 mad!

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~dragondreamzero Jan 19, 2008, 8:54:38 PM
wow. interesting.

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Always Rhyme like a Dreamer..
Staying True like a Believer..
L.R.P. remains in me 4ever..
Howl! A Lobo stares into the melody moon..
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~kitty-666 Jan 19, 2008, 9:11:59 PM
Thank ur

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Reach higher with FIRE-go Flareon!
Think twice about ICE to be number one
WATER's in order if you wanna to be slick

Mewtwo's the best bet when you get PSYCHIC
:icondragondreamzero:
~dragondreamzero Jan 19, 2008, 10:50:05 PM
can't wait for more. keep it up =)

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Always Rhyme like a Dreamer..
Staying True like a Believer..
L.R.P. remains in me 4ever..
Howl! A Lobo stares into the melody moon..
Please Visit Vastgamers [link] it's me and my friends' game database website.
:iconkitty-666:
~kitty-666 Jan 19, 2008, 10:54:57 PM
kk

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Reach higher with FIRE-go Flareon!
Think twice about ICE to be number one
WATER's in order if you wanna to be slick

Mewtwo's the best bet when you get PSYCHIC
:iconelsie01:
~Elsie01 Jan 20, 2008, 5:01:25 PM
May I critique?

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Yennoe when you said your Uncle died and I said LOL? Well, what I meant was LOTS OF LOVE!!!
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~kitty-666 Jan 22, 2008, 5:14:05 PM
...wha?

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Reach higher with FIRE-go Flareon!
Think twice about ICE to be number one
WATER's in order if you wanna to be slick

Mewtwo's the best bet when you get PSYCHIC
:iconelsie01:
~Elsie01 Jan 22, 2008, 5:34:20 PM
It's a fancy word for me to suggest ideas to help you with your writing. Critique! :)

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Yennoe when you said your Uncle died and I said LOL? Well, what I meant was LOTS OF LOVE!!!
:iconkitty-666:
~kitty-666 Jan 22, 2008, 5:45:06 PM
oh....OK!

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Reach higher with FIRE-go Flareon!
Think twice about ICE to be number one
WATER's in order if you wanna to be slick

Mewtwo's the best bet when you get PSYCHIC
:iconelsie01:
~Elsie01 Jan 22, 2008, 6:36:21 PM
Okay, here it goes:

An author usually starts new paragraphs as another character speaks.

Hope this helps!

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Yennoe when you said your Uncle died and I said LOL? Well, what I meant was LOTS OF LOVE!!!
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